It is true that nowsaday, a considerable amount of individuals has tendency to using up their credits instead of sparing expenses. There are a number of reasons for this trend, which is having a significant impact on both family life and on the community as a whole.
There are two important causes of this situation. Firstly, I would argue that trying to catch up with the standard of society make people expend all their incomes. With the development of economic and technology, life is more sophisticated and require each individual’s effort to adopt with that criteria. For instance, every year a new upgrade version of Iphone will be present, because of that, the old version would be considered outmoded. Eventually, people tend to use their money to replace the old ones as ordinary in place of saving it. Secondly, a phenomena called “Sophaholic” in which people have an addiction in shopping and prevent them from economizing, is more common recently. In addition, advertisement also contribute in encouraging people spend more money than their intention.
However, this tendency could have negative consequences to individual statement and then society. An important concern toward future and unexpected circumstance should be took into account. Refusing to saving money may take them to the unprepared future position which easily lead to poverty if they can not tackle with some financial issues with coming events such as diseases, accidents, jobless or suffer losses. Additionally, keeping money is a wise investment for both particular person and their family since you are helping a hand when you are old and reduce pressure for society and family.
To sum up, it is stated that there are many reasons for people to use their money and not save it. As a result, it can cause many negative out-come for both individuals and society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 561, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a phenomenon' or simply 'phenomena'?
Suggestion: a phenomenon; phenomena
...dinary in place of saving it. Secondly, a phenomena called 'Sophaholic' in which ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19141914191 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98962905843 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597359735974 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9507647924 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.866666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243581456449 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792148259297 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815340066532 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149361572409 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828143913297 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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