Many people prefer to travel by car rather than buses or trains.
Why do you think this happens?
What can government do to motivate people travel by buses or trains?
In this globalized world people prefer to travel by their own cars or customised taxis rather than opting for public transport to reach a destination faster. No doubt travelling in cars can save time but it can also be a major threat to the eco system. In this essay, we will discuss about how government initiatives can encourage more use of public transport.
Firstly, let us discuss on what why individuals prefer to travel by car. Cars are more convenient to drive exactly to the destination, there is no need to walk. buses and trains run on schedule and if a person is not time sensitive, then he/she will not be able to board. For instance, if there is a family of four who wants to visit a mall on a weekend, they go in-car rather than bus as the price of ticket for four costs the same as car price.
However in order to help the public, government can have several bus stops in different area. Along with this, they will also have to reduce the cost of tickets in public transport and increase the price car parking area tickets. When there is less or no space for parking cars, people opt for alternatives. Well, a ruling party can also work on improving the footpath beside the road which will help men/women to walk easily towards the destination.
I would like to conclude that use of public transport not just benefits an individual but also helps the society to grow. this in turn helps in maintaining ecological balance by reducing pollution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Buses
... destination, there is no need to walk. buses and trains run on schedule and if a per...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...r four costs the same as car price. However in order to help the public, government...
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Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ual but also helps the society to grow. this in turn helps in maintaining ecological...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, well, for instance, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62213740458 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51751338964 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606870229008 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5020427627 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1538461538 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228803372149 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783037029659 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659137085352 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129480218518 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865008242183 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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