It has long been a subject of discussion whether a large number of individuals prefer to work hard, so that they can earn more money or not. In my opinion, the former notion has several elements that deserve attention, and I will explain why using the pertinent arguments.
On the one hand, no doubt, in this modernized world, human beings follow a hectic working schedule in order to gain more bucks. The first and foremost reason is to achieve financial stability. People who are spending more hours at workplace considered as financial stable or independent, because of their earning. For example, according to a recent survey done by Stanford University 45% of people receive large amount of pay as they work around the clock whereas other people who are doing part-time jobs are less stable economically. Therefore, not able to fulfill their basic needs such as shelter, and food. In addition to this,the person having more money always seems to be independent and confident. He can manage his future in an effective way because of the currency he received from the job. As a result, it is clear that humans give priority to work hard so that they can earn dollars.
On the other hand, other think that getting wages while doing a job is not important for them. An excitment and satisfaction are the main factors why people working hard. Even though dollars are essential for survival, still some people perform duties in different sectors according to their interests. To illustrate, a recent academic study conducted by the Australian government that 60% of citizens working in healthcare, army and teaching profession because of their interest. Consequently, for such human beings money is not as important as job satisfaction which makes them happy. Moreover, for personal growth some perform volunteer jobs rather than paid jobs which indicates that not all humans work hard to get money.
In conclusion, from what we have discussed above, I believe that the main reason why people work hard is to make themself economically stable, and boost their confidence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ered as financial stable or independent, because of their earning. For example, a...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...s shelter, and food. In addition to this,the person having more money always seems t...
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Line 3, column 734, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an effective way" with adverb for "effective"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...and confident. He can manage his future in an effective way because of the currency he received fro...
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Line 5, column 511, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
... interest. Consequently, for such human beings money is not as important as job satisf...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, whereas, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0523255814 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65778446834 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595930232558 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9334221009 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.235294118 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2352941176 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280878083266 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815303316982 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638576213852 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165815614538 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209089595967 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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