Around the globe, people are fond of maliciousness cuisines. Fraction of people contemplate that, enjoying food at home is healthier as compare to eating out site.in my view, I agree with that point of view, because consumption of homemade food is vital for spend healthy life. This essay will discuss about the benefits of homemade food and also describe about why we should not eat restaurant or canteen cuisine.
First, economical pressure is reduced, when we eat home based food rather than ready-made food from out site. Cafe cuisine often so costly, while at home we can make taste food with simple and reasonable ingredients, and we make large amount of food for the whole family in half price as compare to restaurant food. For instance, it is commonly observed that, students and workers spend their life hand to mouth, that is why, they prefer to cook food at home.
Secondly, homemade food is clean and having all nutrition values like vitamins and minerals which are required for our healthier body. Contrary to this, ready-made food often having plethora of contamination such as, cook in restaurants do not follow the rules and instruction of cooking, they do not tie hairs properly and also do not use healthy cooking oil. However, people are suffering from many diseases like vomiting, stomach problem and hepatitis. It is observed in my surrounding, in food stalls or cafe's people having many diseases, and the interesting thing is, they do not know about them. They cook food normally, but by their hands a lot of germs transfer into cuisine, which other people eat them.
Last but not least, every person having their own taste of food some people like to eat mild taste, while other like spicy food. Restaurants having standard taste in all items. A person is habitual to eat less spicy food or a person having a high blood pressure problem, cannot enjoy mush spicy food which make in canteen. For example, if u miss your mom’s handmade soup, you could not find the taste of your mom’s taste food in restaurant.
To sum up, it cannot be denied that, for the recreation and make a change in our daily routine, we should hang out with or family and enjoy food from canteen. However, we should take some innovative steps in government level. Government should keep check and balance on the hygienic condition of hotels and restaurant food and by increase charges, we can decrease the number of people who love to buy ready-made food.
- people should be allowed to work as long as they want to, and not be forced to retire at a particular age such as 60 or 65.Do you agree or disagree? 78
- Many people say that cooking and eating at home is better for the individual and the family than eating out in restaurants or canteens.Do you agree or disagree? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ly, while at home we can make taste food with simple and reasonable ingredients, ...
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...why, they prefer to cook food at home. Secondly, homemade food is clean and hav...
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...cuisine, which other people eat them. Last but not least, every person having ...
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... mom's taste food in restaurant. To sum up, it cannot be denied that, for...
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...people who love to buy ready-made food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2054.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 421.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87885985748 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46769686511 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527315914489 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 627.3 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9179573814 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.111111111 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3888888889 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228436260933 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775010302698 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430917847357 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138293644956 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506490335468 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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