Around the globe, people have been doing their jobs on particular posts, and these jobs have age limits. Fraction of people contemplate that, overage people having great experience of job, that is why, they should not permissible to stop their work at fixed age limit. In my view, I disagree with this point of view, because out of age people do not do their work with zeal.
First, new generation has new techniques and different skills, as the time passes, the youth become sagacious at an early age, because it is an advance era. Even little children are using mobile phones and internet more efficiently as compare to elder. Contrary to this fragile people do their work on their traditional methods, which are not applicable in present times. For instance, it is commonly observed feeble people keep their business records in huge files form, and it is very hard to manage it properly. On the other hand, young ones work through internet.
Secondly, healthy mind is a superior need in any business or job. Adults are too much ambitious related to their work, their energy level are so high as compare to poor people. The youth has many dreams related to their bright future that is why, they do their work with fresh mind. For example it is generally observed that, people who reached at the stage of retirement, could not give full attention to their work, due to plethora of tensions related to their family. Alternately, young ones have control on their thoughts and they can take care of their health appropriately.
In a nutshell, it cannot deny that working experience is countable of fragile people, but I opined that, the youth can accept more challenges as compare to under 65 age group people. We should give space to our young generation to do something unique. Fresh mind, confidence, and new talent are the top priorities in adults, which are not as much in retired individuals.
- Many people say that cooking and eating at home is better for the individual and the family than eating out in restaurants or canteens.Do you agree or disagree? 56
- people should be allowed to work as long as they want to, and not be forced to retire at a particular age such as 60 or 65.Do you agree or disagree? 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84097859327 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46061286666 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565749235474 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5581946543 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9375 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182064717627 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623792156773 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484996219313 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119913974712 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574471694781 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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