Many people say that globalisation and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the time of globalisation, most multinational companies are collaborating with each other for prosperity. Incubation greatly helps them to open their manufacturing plants in foreign countries and expand their businesses. In this case, most people believe that growing industrialisation deeply affects their surrounding and environment. I believe that it definitely affects atmosphere due to production of various gases and toxics for a particular region, but other benefits employment opportunities, improvement in the living standards can not be overseen completely.
To begin with, almost all the companies are shaking hands with each other to develop Special Economic Zones, which creates win-win situation for each party. In fact, these SEZ eventually produce harmful gases and toxic wastes, which would be harmful for localities. For example, many American MNC’s collaborated with Chinese manufacturers in order to decrease their operational cost. As a result, many region in the china had been converted to Special Economic Zones, due to that suburb people had complaint the Chinese government about air, noise and water pollutions.
However, this development also has positive side. Industrialisation encourages employment options within the area, it also strengthens county’s economy in better way. Moreover, it also increases living standards of the countrymen’s in all the possible manner. For instance, as a result of evolving SEZ areas in China, Chinese people per capita income has been increased. Powerful income sources leads them to live healthy and rich life such as they are now capable enough to buy latest technologies which give relief to their routine chores.
To conclude, nowadays income is as prominent factor as an environment. Therefore, despite the bitter truth that
multinational companies have adverse consequences on the environment, it is now imperative to have such development for the country’s government and for the individual's growth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 403, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun region seems to be countable; consider using: 'many regions'.
Suggestion: many regions
...se their operational cost. As a result, many region in the china had been converted to Spec...
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Line 5, column 486, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'buy the latest'.
Suggestion: buy the latest
... such as they are now capable enough to buy latest technologies which give relief to their...
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Line 7, column 112, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Therefore, despite the bitter truth that multinational companies have adverse con...
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Line 8, column 163, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...e country's government and for the individuals growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in fact, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82033898305 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27027474781 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616949152542 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0379411602 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.466666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0829823670271 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0286864087682 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035520090997 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0538534959299 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380646746286 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.48 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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