Many people think that the government should spend money to explore outer space, while others think that it’s a waste of public money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Several individuals have this opinion that the govenrment should spend funds for space exploration, whereas, others have this notion the it is just a waste of public funds. This essay agrees that government should allocate budget on the developemnt of country and building infrastructure rather than in exploring space. This essay will discuss both the views.
Humanity's interent in the heavens has been universal and enduring. Humans are driven to explore the unknown, discover new worlds, push the boundaries of our scientific and technical limits and then push further. Moreover, it is undoubtedly true that society is utilising natural resources indescriminately and thus causing harm to the environemnt. A day will come, Earth will no longer be able to support human life and thus, it will be mandatory to move to a different planet and start a new life there. For all the aforementioned reasons it is necessary that sufficient money is spend in investigating space. To elucidate, National Aeronautics and Space Administration receives huge funds from govenrment to carry out their research about not only differnet planet that is suitable for humans but also about asteriods, comets and comets.
Several individuals believe that rather than wasting money on space exploration money should be invested in various other aspects that are essential for making human life more convenient and comfortable. Instead Govenment should allocate budget on the development of country by buiding various infrastructure such as health care centres and schools which, as it is the basic necessity of poeple to get good treatment and proper education. Furthermore, money should be used in taking steps in protecting environemt and reduce the harmful affects of pollution such as planting more trees and constructing nuclear power stations. To exemplify, accroding to the recemt report more funds are invested in making human life more easy by advancement of nation.
To conclude, while the money spendin on space will help you to understand and increase the knowledge about what lies beyond our planet, some still feel that money should be spend on the developemnt of country and making lives more comfortable. In my pinion, i vehmently agree that money should not be wasted in investigating space, rather than it should be spend on people and constructing infrastructures to make their lives easy.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'it'?
Suggestion: the; it
...ation, whereas, others have this notion the it is just a waste of public funds. This e...
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Line 2, column 581, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...t is necessary that sufficient money is spend in investigating space. To elucidate, N...
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Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...n life more convenient and comfortable. Instead Govenment should allocate budget on the...
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Line 4, column 174, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'spent'?
Suggestion: spent
...t, some still feel that money should be spend on the developemnt of country and makin...
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Line 4, column 357, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'spent'?
Suggestion: spent
...igating space, rather than it should be spend on people and constructing infrastructu...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, then, thus, whereas, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2013.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3253968254 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92805518743 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550264550265 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.2712842531 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.2 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233554807469 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078688771615 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731011610732 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14938785757 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621422053649 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'it'?
Suggestion: the; it
...ation, whereas, others have this notion the it is just a waste of public funds. This e...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 581, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...t is necessary that sufficient money is spend in investigating space. To elucidate, N...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...n life more convenient and comfortable. Instead Govenment should allocate budget on the...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 174, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'spent'?
Suggestion: spent
...t, some still feel that money should be spend on the developemnt of country and makin...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 357, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'spent'?
Suggestion: spent
...igating space, rather than it should be spend on people and constructing infrastructu...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, then, thus, whereas, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2013.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3253968254 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92805518743 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550264550265 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.2712842531 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.2 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233554807469 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078688771615 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731011610732 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14938785757 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621422053649 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.