Many people think that home cooked food is healthy, but many people still prefer eating out. Why is this so?
In the present era of workaholics people prefer to consume homemade food rather at streets, restrurants and hotels. But still huge population intake food at street inspite of know the nutritional value which could result in their unhealthy diet. Now a days people prefer the street food over the homemade food. Today’s generation live a busy professional life and work has become the most priority amongst any other things. So, it become difficult to get some spare time for cooking meal at home. Thus, in such situation easily available readymade food become more preferable. For example, a person working for 9 hours a day and commuting takes 2 hours in traffic leaves no time for him to cook homemade meal. Therefore, this kind of busy schedule does not give chance to prepare food for themselves as it requires them to go for grocery shopping, cleaning and various other tasks for cooking.
There are variety of food available at the restrurants which gives people a chance to enjoy different tastes according to their choice. However, food stalls and restrurants advertise many food items with their image along with their prices which attracts people to consume them. Some of them also display the discounted prices on various food items on different days in a week. For example, the price of cheese bugger on Monday would be $10 as compare to other days in a week it will be on its regular price for $15.
In fact, these readymade food items may showcase a luxury meals but are unhealthy in the real life. Most of the street food are just served for earning profits and prepared under unhygernic conditions, with low quaily of food products, preservatives and chemicals. This food items results are unhealthy and chances of getting diseases if comsued everyday contiuesly.
In the conculsion, the busy professional live is the real culprit for people for consuming these unhealthy food on the sake of health. This habit must be avoided as much as possible. No food can compete the nutritional value that is supplied by the homemade clean and fresh food.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 247, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...h could result in their unhealthy diet. Now a days people prefer the street food over the ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 432, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...iority amongst any other things. So, it become difficult to get some spare time for co...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 439, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ce of cheese bugger on Monday would be 0 as compare to other days in a week it wi...
^^
Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this readymade' or 'these readymades'?
Suggestion: this readymade; these readymades
...n its regular price for 5. In fact, these readymade food items may showcase a luxury meals ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'meal'?
Suggestion: meal
...dymade food items may showcase a luxury meals but are unhealthy in the real life. Mos...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 347, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... chances of getting diseases if comsued everyday contiuesly. In the conculsion...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 368, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iseases if comsued everyday contiuesly. In the conculsion, the busy professional...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, in fact, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92550143266 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55924777641 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553008595989 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0094848789 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3888888889 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205831159279 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714304841832 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554543105974 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124281607432 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02991397263 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 247, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...h could result in their unhealthy diet. Now a days people prefer the street food over the ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 432, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...iority amongst any other things. So, it become difficult to get some spare time for co...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 439, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ce of cheese bugger on Monday would be 0 as compare to other days in a week it wi...
^^
Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this readymade' or 'these readymades'?
Suggestion: this readymade; these readymades
...n its regular price for 5. In fact, these readymade food items may showcase a luxury meals ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'meal'?
Suggestion: meal
...dymade food items may showcase a luxury meals but are unhealthy in the real life. Mos...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 347, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... chances of getting diseases if comsued everyday contiuesly. In the conculsion...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 368, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iseases if comsued everyday contiuesly. In the conculsion, the busy professional...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, in fact, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92550143266 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55924777641 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553008595989 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0094848789 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3888888889 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205831159279 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714304841832 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554543105974 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124281607432 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02991397263 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.