Majority of people believe that money are much more important because it can make life more easier. I totally disagree with this point of view, there are much more things are important in life that money can’t bought.
On the one hand, some people say that money can satisfied our dissertation and there will be more opportunities can be achieved in life. It is true that thing will become easier if we have more money. We can afford large house, raise our families and pay the bills. In addition, students can complete their education then become a useful person if they don’t have to worry about their tuition fee. For example, most of wealthier people that they never worried about housing or bills.
On the other hand, I believe that families and friends are the most valuable of precious that money can’t be purchase. In this modern society that is difficult to meet a true friend who willing to share your pressure and happiness and it is possible to purchase or produces such of thing like this. Furthermore, families as we know they do always forgive any mistakes that we had made and the support they have giving whatever they agree or disagree. The true love always came from the families and they will never ask any return.
In conclusion, although there are some of benefits have present that money can achieve more opportunities in life, I believe that families and friends are more important because you will never have it through money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...more important because it can make life more easier. I totally disagree with this point of ...
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Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[4]
Message: The verb 'can't' requires base form of this verb: 'buy'
Suggestion: buy
... are important in life that money can’t bought. On the one hand, some people say th...
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Line 7, column 35, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the benefits') or simply say ''some benefits''.
Suggestion: some of the benefits; some benefits
...n. In conclusion, although there are some of benefits have present that money can achieve mor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80632411067 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32983082472 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525691699605 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3698940724 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.333333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217683321361 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857487095309 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646452646261 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135573602316 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506754737705 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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