Many people today are worried about young children using video games. What problems might these games cause, for children and society as a whole? How could these problems be reduced?
A large number of individuals are concerned about kids playing computer games. This essay will explain what are the problems of children playing virtual games and suggest possible solutions.
With regards to the cardinal problems of computer games, an important one is that they reduce the physical activity of a child. This is because video games do not need any physical movement of body muscles, instead, a kid can sit-back and play with help of a remote controller. As a result, the child will not have body fitness and stamina. The possible alternative to this problem is to send kids to one of the sports activities such as swimming, tennis, basketball, and many other sports. Thereby, ensuring the kid is involved in regular exercise and stay healthy.
Another pressing problem of computerized games is that they isolate a child from mingling with other offspring in the society. This is because they can play such games as a single player by staying at home rather than going to a playground and playing with others as a team. Accordingly, they will not learn the trait of teamwork, which can be acquired only by participating in group activities. The probable solution to this is to encourage participation of offspring in community sports tournaments as there will be other people from various communities.
In conclusion, the vital problems of computer games are lack of physical fitness and bonding with other children in the society, while, these problems can be solved by involving kids in regular real sports and motivating them to participate in local community sports activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
A large number of individuals are concerned about kids pl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, so, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10646387833 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78031279251 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528517110266 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7072827671 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.916666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184344488898 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674026453539 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582743318806 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129690788891 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048398682144 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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