“Many people try to look younger than their age. What are the cause’s people do this. Do you think this is a good thing or bad thing?”
Youth is the most cherished period of everyone’s life because of not only, we look beautiful or handsome but also we have fullest energy. As we grow old, we lose out physical strength and beauty. There are plethora of reasons why human always wants to look young through out their life span. This is not at all a good habit for us to look young all the time. I will explain what force people to look young and what are the drawbacks of this mentality in my further paragraphs.
To embark on, there is no doubt that teenage is the most loved time by people because we look young, energetic and full of hopes. All people are at the peak of their beauty in youth and it attracts other. We all need attention from others and good-looking people usually get more appreciations. As we grow older, out beauty also fades away as a result people are getting less response from others. Therefore, manly attention seekers always want to look young. For instance, models will get jobs only if they look young and beautiful.
This obsession to look young can be a killer for people. Firstly, people start taking support from artificial medicines, which lead to many deterioration on health. Secondly, people suffers from mental trauma whenever they start getting rejection due to fading beauty, many of them commit suicide. Lastly, it is a parasite for the society as people start believing that only good-looking people will get attention and job preferences. Although having capabilities, inferior complexion people get rejections in jobs.
To recapitulate, it is a disease for a healthy society that have a mentality to look young always. We must embrace our aging gracefully then only all section of people will get similar priority.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the fullest'.
Suggestion: have the fullest
... look beautiful or handsome but also we have fullest energy. As we grow old, we lose out phy...
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Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: CONFUSION_OF_OUR_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'our'?
Suggestion: our
...fullest energy. As we grow old, we lose out physical strength and beauty. There are...
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Line 1, column 269, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...ns why human always wants to look young through out their life span. This is not at all a g...
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Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun deterioration seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much deterioration', 'a good deal of deterioration'.
Suggestion: much deterioration; a good deal of deterioration
...rom artificial medicines, which lead to many deterioration on health. Secondly, people suffers fro...
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Line 7, column 92, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...ety that have a mentality to look young always. We must embrace our aging gracefully t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for instance, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89491525424 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63659526431 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566101694915 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1302869343 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.2222222222 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3888888889 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61111111111 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204209063433 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705812251661 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403020435425 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129418898893 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396535761955 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.