Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter:
give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre
explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community
describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you to bring your notice to a severe problem that our society may face from the decision of closing "the Height" sport center of our township. All our society members are using this sport center from years, in my case since my childhood.
Interestingly, this the only sport center left in our township, as most of the open fields are captured by builders. This center is more than a sporting complex; it is community center in broad sense. In the evening, all age groups of people enjoy their time; younger ones play footballs or crickets, older ones use the park for walking, and few of them use just for relaxation.
If this particular center is closed citing financial issue, then I believe it is not a right decision looking at the enormous benefits that local people are getting. The physical activities of the younger and older people will stop, which will deteriorate their health condition. In facts, to tackle the financial issue, we, all society members, are willing to pay a nominal annual membership fee, which will be helpful for you to manage the running cost.
Hope, you will look into the matter once again before taking any final decision.
Yours faithfully,
Bibhu Kalita
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so, then, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91904761905 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47439953549 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647619047619 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.6091555162 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.3 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124013330988 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520099955574 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396160189272 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0598863746131 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366316432319 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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