Everyone all around the world wants to look good or charming irrespective of their age. Many people try to hide their real age and wanted to look younger. Basically they are scared to have old and dull skin, diseases and problem that comes with the old age. Personally, I believe it is a bad thing to do so and I will elaborate this in my essay.
To begin with, the need to defeat aging is a new trend in which lots of people want to have some sort of secret formula that can help then and achieve a younger age for life long. For example, many people including celebrities go under plastic surgery for the glowing and beautiful skin, they have to look good on screen as they are getting work because of that. Lots of makeup and beauty products are there in the market which claims that they can obtain your desirable goal. However, no one is noticing the harmful effect of these products on our skin and body if we apply these for long period of time. Doctors are warning everyone to avoid all these kind of stuff if you do not want to have some serious skin-related diseases.
People can achieve this if they include some of the good habits in there lifestyle like exercise and a healthy diet. For example, there are lots of sportsperson who look younger than there age because of this, everyone admires the hard work that football star Cristino Ronaldo do to look fit and young. But that does not mean it is going to stay forever because it is a part of our life.
To conclude, people should not be obsessed to look younger and then later they face lots of problem in their life, instead of they should look to be fit and healthy to enjoy their life. People need to realize this and stop these negative trends as there is no harm in getting old rather than trying to be young. They should learn and appreciate the wisdom and maturity that comes with aging.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun makeup seems to be countable; consider using: 'Lots of makeups'.
Suggestion: Lots of makeups
... they are getting work because of that. Lots of makeup and beauty products are there in the ma...
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Line 3, column 591, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...kin and body if we apply these for long period of time. Doctors are warning everyone to avoid ...
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Line 3, column 649, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...ctors are warning everyone to avoid all these kind of stuff if you do not want to have som...
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Line 5, column 41, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...People can achieve this if they include some of the good habits in there lifestyle like exe...
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Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of problems'.
Suggestion: lots of problems
...o look younger and then later they face lots of problem in their life, instead of they should l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, then, for example, kind of, sort of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42898550725 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14374428781 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507246376812 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1849059557 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.866666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326569811965 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109048030016 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950831125254 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218707449275 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0913828602633 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.