Many people try to look younger than their age. What are the causes people do this? Do you think this is a good thing or bad thing?
It is argued that manifold men and women endeavor to look younger than their age. The plausible causes of this vogue are profession as well as fear of looking older. According to me, this is a bad thing which I will elucidate in this essay.
To commence with, type of work could be the reason why some people want to look young. This is because more importance is given to the physical appearance in several jobs. Consequently, to survive in this competitive job market, it is vital for people to look younger. For example, in Airline industry, Air-hostess must have to look youthful, otherwise they may lose their work. In addition to this, it is very arduous for an individual to accept the reality that they are getting older. Therefore, people prefer to do anything to look younger because they have the phobia of becoming older.
This is a bad thing due to plethora of reasons. Firstly, when people are in the race of looking young, sometimes they take decisions which can cause detrimental implications on their health. To exemplify, in Brazil, women are doing plastic surgery to look young; however, recently it is found to be one of the cardinal reasons of cancer. Moreover, people who are keen to look youthful spend most of their time to maintain their physical appearance instead of doing any productive work ans live under stress as well which is not good for their health.
In conclusion, profession and unwillingness to adopt reality could be the reasons why myriad of people try to look younger. Furthermore, pernicious effects on health, waste of precious time and tension are the reasons to deem it as a bad thing. It is recommended that rather than trying to look younger, people should concentrate on their profession which is more effective.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8642384106 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.643058305 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533112582781 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8043284649 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8125 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3125 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.440572413705 0.244688304435 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142661985642 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636300912162 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276430033822 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410521479243 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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