Many people use social media to keep in touch with other people and for news events. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
Internet has changed the way people interact and fetch their surrounding information. More and more people are now preferring it on social media. I believe that even though there are a few drawbacks of the trend, the advantages are far more.
First of all, the paramount advantage of social media is that it allows people to stay connected no matter how far they might be living. It acts a good platform for people to stay in touch with friends and relatives who live abroad. To illustrate, more than half of the world population is connected through social media according to a survey done in 2018. Moreover, everyone is running a rat race, no one has any time to go out and interact with others as everyone is running a rat race in this fast paced world. So, with the help of these sites, they can easily stay in contact by simply dropping a message or making a call during their work or school time.
In addition, time is another major factor why people are getting distant from news as no one has the time to sit and watch TV or read newspaper as they did in the bygone era. Now, they can simply go on the social sites and get the news they require. To exemplify, pages on Facebook such as ‘Quint’ posts the news in 60 words for people to read quickly. Further, people get a chance to get news of local and international happening as it provides opportunity for locals to express their viewpoint.
On the other hand, it has been widely seen that due to social websites, the face to face interaction has dramatically plunged and is not as strong. Furthermore,, the news on such social websites are written by non professional journalist. There have been several cases when a false information created chaos and a toxic environment.
In recapitulation, I think that it is a boon that social media allows people to stay in contact and updated with the surrounding at the same place. It is suggested that an amalgamation of real and virtual friend should be maintained and people should always verify the news they get do so that harmony can be maintained.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Two consecutive commas
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, i think, in addition, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67119565217 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69453293516 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538043478261 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1640657856 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.117647059 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6470588235 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312416178547 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950872812222 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558152343935 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160672282403 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423089601871 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.