Many people use social media to keep in touch with other people and for news events. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
Internet has changed the way people interact and obtain their surrounding information. More and more people are preferring to do this now on social media. I believe that even though there are a few drawbacks of this trend, the advantages are far more.
First of all, the main advantage of social media is that it allows people to stay connected no matter how far they might be living. It is a good platform for people to stay connected with friends and relatives who live abroad. To illustrate, around 2.65 billion people are connected through social media according to 2018 survey. Moreover, in this fast paced world, where everyone is running a rat race, no one has any time to go out and interact. So, they can easily stay in contact by simply dropping a message or making a call during their work or school time.
In addition, time is another major factor why people are getting distant from news as no one has the time to sit and watch TV or read newspaper as they did in bygone era. Now, they can simply go on the social sites and get the news they require. To exemplify, pages on Facebook and such as Quint posts the news in 60 words for people to read quickly. It also gives a chance for people to get news of local and international happening as it gives opportunity for locals to express their viewpoint.
On the other hand, it has been widely seen that due to social websites, the face to face interaction has dramatically plunged. This means that the bonding between is no longer the same. Furthermore, the news on such social websites are written by non professional journalist. There have been several cases when a false information created chaos and a toxic environment.
In recapitulation, there is always a risk of loosing real friends and be a victim of rumours. However, I think that it is a boon that social media allows people to stay in contact and updated with the surrounding at the same place. It is suggested that an amalgamation of real and virtual friend should be maintained and people should always verify the news they get.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...nding information. More and more people are preferring to do this now on social media. I belie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, i think, in addition, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6693989071 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57539569075 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53825136612 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8803339182 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.9473684211 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2631578947 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05263157895 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297591372086 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873646326322 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677545345797 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15414921862 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04217020583 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.