Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case?Is this good thing or bad thing?
In contemporary Era ,a majority of people are fond of trendy apparels and so is clothing. This trend is increasing day by day due to a number of factors. In my opinion,following this is a good practice.
To start with,a number of people wear fashionable outfits to look smart, elegant and unique in their peers group.This boosts their confidence not only in their friends circle but also in any social event.It is observed that individuals are influenced by their favorite personalities like bollywood stars, cricketers and leaders etc as they spend most of their times on social media and they also want to be the center of attraction. Since people love to wear trendy apparels ,they are aware of their physics;and in order to maintain it they follow healthy diet rules and exercise routine that is a positive development.
Furthermore a decent attire reflects the personality, status as well as character of individuals.They are judged by others looking at their own style of dressing. Sometimes they represent themselves as fashion freaks that also inspire others how to carry different style of clothing without hesitation that is an important character of a personality to survive in modern society.
Inspite of having the positive impacts,this trend also has negative ones.For instance,it is quite commonly seen that many people who cannot afford the expensive branded dresses buy these by hook or crook that leads them to burden of high credits and disrupt their budget consequently.
To conclude, I think this is a good practice which motivate people to stay updated and enthusiastic.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, look, so, thus, well, for instance, i think, as well as, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24714828897 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02304086001 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6463878327 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.514988373 49.4020404114 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 153.333333333 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2222222222 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1111111111 7.06120827912 200% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152990618652 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732528241634 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605461988803 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963540690639 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662238883093 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
In contemporary Era ,a majority of people are fond of trendy...
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In contemporary Era ,a majority of people are fond of trendy ...
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... trend is increasing day by day due to a number of factors. In my opinion,followi...
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...e to a number of factors. In my opinion,following this is a good practice. To start ...
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...on,following this is a good practice. To start with,a number of people wear fa...
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...s is a good practice. To start with,a number of people wear fashionable outfi...
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...elegant and unique in their peers group.This boosts their confidence not only in the...
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...ince people love to wear trendy apparels ,they are aware of their physics;and in o...
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...utine that is a positive development. Furthermore a decent attire reflects t...
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...development. Furthermore a decent attire reflects the personality, status ...
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...tus as well as character of individuals.They are judged by others looking at their o...
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...tation that is an important character of a personality to survive in modern socie...
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...onality to survive in modern society. Inspite of having the positive impacts,t...
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... who cannot afford the expensive branded dresses buy these by hook or crook that ...
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...nd disrupt their budget consequently. To conclude, I think this is a good prac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, look, so, thus, well, for instance, i think, as well as, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24714828897 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02304086001 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6463878327 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.514988373 49.4020404114 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 153.333333333 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2222222222 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1111111111 7.06120827912 200% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152990618652 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732528241634 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605461988803 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963540690639 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662238883093 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.