Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities
Does this situation have more advantage or more disadvantages?
A majority of people now work for longer hours resulting in inadequate time for leisure. In my opinion, working for long hours can bring more problems compared to any advantage it might have.
Admittedly, there are some basic benefits derived from working for extended periods.
Firstly, people engaged in such are often more productive. These practices enable them to add extra input in order that deadlines are met. This is especially prevalent in developing countries, where jobs are scarce and workers are not afforded adequate protection by existing labour laws. As a result, people work longer than necessary to safeguard their jobs. Secondly, more work attracts more monetary benefits. Many companies have overtime policies in place, and this ensures that staff are rewarded for putting in extra shift at work while augmenting their take-home salaries.
Despite the positive aspects above, working for long hours without making time for recreational activities has serious drawbacks. One potentially dangerous problem is the risk of fatigue or burn out. Most People are often exhausted after work to engage in any muscle relaxing activities, and failure to do this can be detrimental to their physical and mental wellbeing. Another obvious issue is that it affects social and family life. Family outing times, dinners and relationships are some of the things that suffer when people work longer. Thus, it is not uncommon to suffer from broken homes.
In conclusion, suffering from burn out and having social cum family issues greatly outweigh any minor benefits derived from working for long hours.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37795275591 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53328025197 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649606299213 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7047206734 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.375 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.875 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323511800532 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968375524007 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790145754168 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173777817294 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780987508648 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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