In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.
What is your opinion about this?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Population explosion is one of the main reasons for the new construction of homes and is the immediate need. The availability of land in urban areas is becoming scarce and hence people are exploring other options to build homes especially the outskirts or the outer terrain of the area. I believe we need to preserve these areas and avoid further colonization to improve our planet’s health.
The countryside is full of lush green areas which helps the community as well as the planet. These areas inhabit the constant growth of trees, shrubs, rivers, lakes which provide us with cleaner and safer atmosphere. It is essential to prevent colonization of these areas to avoid loss of ecosystem in these places. A variety of flora and fauna can be found in such areas and they need to be protected for the betterment of our planet.
For instance, retaining the countryside as is will help the farmers in the community to support their cattle and earn a living. The farmer help produce fresh groceries and meat; basically the daily needs and they export these to the urban areas. Due to which we are able to acquire healthy produce. We are dependent of the farmlands and should protect the countryside for the same.
To conclude, I believe it is of utmost importance that we preserve the wilds. We need to refrain from expanding the concrete jungle to such areas so as to not destroy the landscape and beauty of such areas. By doing this we are delaying the occurrence of any natural calamity in the near future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 147, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...nding the concrete jungle to such areas so as to not destroy the landscape and beauty of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, so, well, as to, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78707224335 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60401037689 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54752851711 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6092606671 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.9285714286 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193058003271 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663155192342 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667231812058 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113350020459 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670040977572 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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