You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Technological advancements have enhanced the ways of communication due to which it is easier to get things done than before. However, it might have impacted negatively on the traditional system of communicating via post or hand-written mail. I believe, the two systems can used equally depending on the usage.
Nowadays, people communicate with each other on a daily basis with the help phone calls, texts; if it is for official reasons electronic mails or third-party softwares developed for video-calling are used. The life of the common man or woman has improved due to such facilities available right at their doorstep. For instance, earlier all the bank communications such as acquiring bank statements or applying for a new chequebook, were done in-person due to techonological restrictions, but now everything is possible by just tapping a few icons on your mobile. You can call the customer care service if faced by any difficulty.
On the other hand, too much dependency on the technology can be mundane. for essential services it is right to make use of technology, but what fun is that while sending an email to your distant friends for staying in touch or making pen-pals for that matter. In my opinion, people who are not techsavvy, and quite uncomfortable with technology will certainly choose the traditional option. For example, a senior citizen wanting to connect with her friend, whom she has not spoken to in years would want to write her a letter as she will feel the warmth of her friends emotions and be more overwhelmed as compared to receiving a mail.
To conclude, the usage of modern means of getting in touch with people and the traditional way of writing letters are both equally essential depending on one's comfort and ease.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...dency on the technology can be mundane. for essential services it is right to make ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, third, while, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01706484642 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97477034104 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634812286689 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6743678779 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.5 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159157694012 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048294839096 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399980071526 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877266258353 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404376174872 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.