In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion?
In contemporary time, there is big concern over required space to build up new residential colonies. A group of individuals conceive a notion that new houses can be constructed in the countryside while others express their concern and opine that conserving the rural site is rather important. I strongly vote in favor of protecting the countryside. My perception is elucidated in ensuing paragraphs.
Pondering the light on my opinion, the foremost argument is that construction of residential properties in rural area will disturb its ecosystem drastically. Rural areas are usually blessed with greenery and those many decades old trees will have to be cut down to arrange the suitable space for new buildings. Besides this, with the rising population other infrastructure like building bridges, roads, public transportation system also have to be enhanced. In turn, this will have direct impact on pollution, hence affecting village's climate.
Moreover, the other argument is that creating space for new homes will decrease the output of agriculture commodities. In rural area, majority of land is devoted for farming to produce various crops. With the surge in demand for new land to build up homes, those agriculture lands will be converted into commercial use. This will not just reduce the production of critical agriculture commodities but also may become reason for food scarcity in long term. In addition to this, local peoples will lose their job as a vast majority of them are dependent on income from farming.
On the contrary, others have different opinion. They claim by depicting justification that with the rising population, there is no option other than scouting land in far city areas. To exemplify my point, in a country like India where available land area is very limited and population is rising in expontial way. Therefore, to meet up the basic necessity of home, countryside is the only solution to construct houses.
In the end to summarize and recapitulate, it is conspicuous from aforesaid deliberation that there is no doubt that space is required but for new home construction but that should not be at the cost of diluting climate of villages. Idle land in countryside area may be explored first to minimize the damage as much possible.
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Suggestion: villages'; village's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, in addition, no doubt, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1914.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20108695652 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91709646667 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578804347826 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.656916416 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.736842105 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3684210526 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94736842105 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228545123562 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643560707585 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539562952252 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123104771329 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284844574556 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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