Needless to say that metropolitans are going to be overcrowded by the people who live in big cities and by those who migrate there so as to find jobs in hope of having better lives so that lack of space in urban areas leads to this fact that countryside become the target of building houses; however, in this essay, I am going to elaborate why I disagree with this standpoint.
First and foremost, there are many natural environments which should be preserved because they are the habitats of many creatures. Should they be destroyed for construction, many animals have to migrate or even they may be extinct, however; the earth is not created only for human being and we do not have the right to deteriorate other creatures’ living places for our convenience.
On the other hand, should new homes be built in rural places, various kinds of pollutions including air, water and noise pollution will be expanded and moved to countrysides while most of people prefer to go to remote places for their vacations according to the silence and beautiful environment as well as being far from civilization. Another issue which is very significant is that if there is no appropriate transportation system, all of the people who live in countrysides should drive their own cars to their workplaces and the more use of the car, the more emission and the more air pollution; therefore the government should subsidy for infrastructures first.
On the basis of the above, it is very important that countrysides be protected from constructions not only because there are trees, rivers and other natural resources which are animals’ habitats, but also different kinds of pollution will be escalated.
- In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes thereWhat is your opinion about this? 61
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...g cities and by those who migrate there so as to find jobs in hope of having better live...
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Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...xpanded and moved to countrysides while most of people prefer to go to remote places for their...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 435, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...s no appropriate transportation system, all of the people who live in countrysides should ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, as to, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02120141343 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95536515868 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579505300353 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.2975951904 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.9409504294 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 236.833333333 106.682146367 222% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.1666666667 20.7667163134 227% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.6666666667 7.06120827912 236% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176368393242 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810916147841 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0227663212726 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959519691208 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026907634022 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.8 13.0946893788 197% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 11.3001002004 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.1190380762 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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