In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.
What is your opinion about them?
In many parts of the world, there is a stimulating discussion about whether or not to build new homes in the countryside. Some people assert that the protection of the countryside from urban utilization is quintessential while others oppose this idea. In my opinion, the countryside is the most important place for any civilization because it is where the majority of food grows and animals feed in order to supply food to the cities.
To embark on, developing suburbs in the agricultural areas might have egregious consequences. Firstly, the construction of new homes in these areas can obligate the farmers to relocate to an unknown zone. Owing to this, they will have to learn weather, soil and pests conditions, which can further reduce the production of crops, consequently, leading to an increase in the market price of that crop. To illustrate, in 2014 it was reported by 'The Daily Mail' in Geelong, Australia, that the ceasing of farmland for building purposes leads to a high surge in rice prices because the production was reduced by more than fifty percent. This forced the Australian government to buy rice from overseas at higher prices, which caused a huge decline in its economy.
Secondly, farm animals also suffer the relocation to new lands if their native space is assigned to new developments. Additionally, animals living in the countryside require a certain type of grass or food in their diet, and these nutrients might not be available in the new location. Thus, this could lead to several diseases and to an increase in veterinarian expenses to look after the health of the farm animals. For example, a study by The University of California showed that in San Diego the relocation of a cattle develops a bacteria in the milk production due to a new type of grass, which caused the waste of more than one million liters of milk and the hospitalization of several people.
To conclude, in my point of view, the countryside is vital for human beings and using this space with the purpose of new dwelling places can create serious repercussions such as less per capita production and sickness of animals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...there is a stimulating discussion about whether or not to build new homes in the countryside. ...
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Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to weather'
Suggestion: to weather
... Owing to this, they will have to learn weather, soil and pests conditions, which can f...
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Line 5, column 514, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a (cattle)' or simply 'cattle'?
Suggestion: a (cattle); cattle
...wed that in San Diego the relocation of a cattle develops a bacteria in the milk product...
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Line 5, column 514, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'cattle'.
Suggestion: cattle
...wed that in San Diego the relocation of a cattle develops a bacteria in the milk product...
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Line 5, column 532, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a bacterium' or simply 'bacteria'?
Suggestion: a bacterium; bacteria
...ego the relocation of a cattle develops a bacteria in the milk production due to a new typ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92777777778 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8684049424 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.030276766 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.461538462 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6923076923 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228200813341 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773931383224 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770109029647 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136646010609 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777363002634 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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