In many places new homes are needed, but the only spaces available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.
What is your opinion above this?
In many countries the rate of growing urbanization is reached up to the highest of the last decade. The people are moving to the countryside rather than settled in the core area of cities which are over flown with population. On the other side, the rural areas are converting in to the mass concrete jungle which affects the green belt of rural area. This essay will discuss both the ideas of building the homes in country side and cities.
Firstly, everyone have a dream to have own house since it is difficult to construct the house in the city area due to congestion. The middle areas of city are almost filled up with business centers and city counseling offices. These days, the developers are preferred to build the apartment or house nearer to countryside. Therefore, people preferred to migrate towards the countryside where they can get new home in reasonable price. However, the habitants of countryside are affecting to the animals and nature.
On the other side of above, building the homes and apartments in countryside would be disturbed the nature and animals. The smoke release from the vehicles contains the carbon and toxic gases which are directly affect the tress and animals. Hence, it is more important to protect the greenery, dense forest, the wildlife centuries, the scenic areas and many more assets of countryside. People should consider it valuable properties of country which is given by god.
In conclusion, I can say that the government should take necessary action against this. This could be stopped only by making firmed policies for construction of building. The horizontal development in city area lead to congestion and complexity, instead of this it could be better to planned vertical development in the city i.e. construction of high rise apartment which occupy less space and has more flats for living. It is prime motto of our society to protect the tress, dense forest, and wildlife centuries in countryside.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03384615385 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6769655169 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553846153846 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7661786742 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2352941176 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1176470588 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76470588235 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213823372162 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06367009052 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561087897871 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123260241614 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266682643278 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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