You work at home and have a problem with piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment.
- Describe the problem with the equipment.
- Explain how this problem is affecting your work.
- Say what you want to shop or company to do.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this to complaint about the printer which purchased last year from your shop. It seems that there is some problem in core part of printer.
Yesterday I was preparing presentation of my project and took the print but suddenly the page jammed in the printer. Later on, I opened the tray and removed the paper. the drum of printer was fully damaged in pieces, it was surprised for me that within a year how could it be damaged! the build quality of printer could not considerably good & genuine. This issue of printer has been continuously facing from last couple of weeks.
It could not possible to take the print of my presentation which must be submitted to company by this week. Due to this problem, even I cannot take print of my important documents & drawings.
On last year, I have purchased this printer. The brand name and model number of the printer is HP & 01XTX respectively. It has two years of comprehensive warranty.
Hence, I would like to request you to replace this with new printer as it is still under warranty period. It would be so grateful for me if you could consider my urgency of presentation submittal and replace this at earliest. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Thank you,
Yours faithfully,
Nisharg Chauhan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... opened the tray and removed the paper. the drum of printer was fully damaged in pi...
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Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... within a year how could it be damaged! the build quality of printer could not cons...
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Line 6, column 193, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t of my important documents & drawings. On last year, I have purchased this prin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77130044843 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63309657778 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605381165919 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3246946788 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.9333333333 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8666666667 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.06666666667 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164641760624 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573786491334 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442321619087 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878453947131 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510769501489 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.