Many schools these days have problems with poor student behavior. Why do you think these problems occur? What could be done tackle these problems?
Misbehavior among students has become a serious problem at school in recent years. In this essay, I tend to analyze the causes along with possible solution to it.
Recently, both parents are working full time and they spend less time with their family. Consequently, children are growing up in a parentless environment. Obviously, kids would suffer from lack of discipline which has led them to inappropriate behavior not only in school but also in society. Moreover, parents try to be lenient when they are faced with aggressive reaction of their children to compensate their absence, and do not bother themselves to implement any rules or punishment. Another contributing factor is media which has a direct influence on youngsters. Movies, internet and even songs are sources of violence and children are capable of imitating whatever they watch or hear.
There are several actions that school authorities and parents could take to tackle the problem described above. Firstly, schools counselor might be a great help. By providing counseling session between teachers, parents and also students, they can suggest different ways about how to interact with those students who are making trouble. Secondly, parents should be more involved with children’s upbringing, spend more time with them and try to develop a close bond with their kids. A third option would be controlling what our child is watching, use software to block websites with offensive content and also for government to invest on producing program that rise moral values among students.
In conclusion, poor behavior at school would definitely have effect on our society in the future. I believe that teachers and parents should cooperate to help students behave better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 36, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...t. Recently, both parents are working full time and they spend less time with their fam...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, even so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32608695652 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74233958164 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9210211123 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180053766113 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569310536017 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531986768407 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110143557537 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386813919566 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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