Many schools these days have problems with poor student behavior. Why do you think these problems occur? What could be done tackle these problems?
The behavior of students reflects the school's reputation. due to bad and misbehavior of them, it is now a controversial situation to talk about. this occurs majorly due to lack of proper guidance for the children. targeted assignments would resolve these complications.
To begin with, children begin their schooling at an early age and school is almost a part of their life, it's no wonder that a child spends 70% of his life in school till the age of 15 or 16. The place where he grows physically and mentally is school. If friends who take part In negligent activities a person tends to learn similar behavior and actions. A major cause of bad conduct is friends and peers. For instance, Institutions who educate poor quality students would gravitate to fail in society, popularity decreases and at the end school wouldn't run as anticipated.
On the other hand, plausible solutions are to take care of their involvement when they are alone or with someone else in school. Every student should get personal attention so that they are streamlined and noticed whatever activity they persuade and if outing or excursions are held all students should have a set of guidelines to follow and if anyone breaks those rules they should be punished by teachers so that others would frighten to do so. For example, schools in Australia implemented a policy that if student misconducts they are suspended for a month along with counseling their parents. Strict regulations like this would benefit schools and increase the school's popularity and is an effective way to tackle the characters.
To conclude, whether or not learning in a good manner depends upon student's mindset, so, taking this into consideration schools should pamper students in an effective way that they should discourage themselves from behaving in a bad way. Just let students understand the school environment and teachers can handle the circumstances with ease.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'schools'' or 'school's'?
Suggestion: schools'; school's
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Due
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Suggestion: This
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Targeted
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... school is almost a part of their life, its no wonder that a child spends 70% of hi...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ularity decreases and at the end school wouldnt run as anticipated. On the other han...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'schools'' or 'school's'?
Suggestion: schools'; school's
... would benefit schools and increase the schools popularity and is an effective way to t...
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
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Message: Consider replacing "in an effective way" with adverb for "effective"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Message: Consider replacing "in a bad way" with adverb for "bad"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09748427673 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82979906473 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600628930818 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.6355590429 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.066666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157250015076 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054301038883 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361422118458 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950730082722 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181837821922 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.