In many societies, elderly people often live in retirement homes. This is not appropriate because families should always care for their aging members.
Do you Agree?
It is indeed true that aging is the most crucial part of life and requires proper care. Elderly people accommodate themselves in retirement homes which can be seen in most of the societies. However, families do not provide support and care to their elder members. This essay will agree that families should extract some valuable time to look after their elders.
To embark on this, bread-runners of the family does not have time to spend quality time with the aging members of their family. This is because they have plethora of responsibilities of their own children, due to which they choose retirement institutes for their parents to live. To illustrate this, families residing in rural India decided to send their elder ones to old age homes. In Contrast, if young ones of the family provide care to the elders of the family, then it might improve relationship among every generation in the family. This will result in happiness for family and it will prove to be beneficial for elders on the grounds of emotional support.
In addition to this, families are not able to afford the medical expenses of their elders. The inflation in countries has caused financial instability in families. For instance, in USA health system is most expensive for elders as compared to other countries. However, Government has provided plenty of alternatives for families to bear the medical expenses of their elders such as health insurance being the one. Furthermore, families believe that buying insurance for elders is waste of money and tiresome task.
In conclusion, the family members need to create a balance between time and money to support their elders. During the state of growing age, they need love and care which can only be showered upon by family rather than retirement homes.
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- In many societies, elderly people often live in retirement homes. This is not appropriate because families should always care for their aging members.Do you Agree? 61
- In many societies, elderly people often live in retirement homes. This is not appropriate because families should always care for their aging members.Do you Agree? 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, so, then, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0101010101 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59491784309 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535353535354 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.9084928161 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.0 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39868419425 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128640904254 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630421321639 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238004693889 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794212249686 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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