Many teenagers now have their own smartphone. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this and give your own opinion?
In the era of global connectivity, smartphones play a pivotal role in connecting us to the outside world thus many teenagers now have their own smartphones. Although there are a plethora of advantages as compared to disadvantages for adolescents in owning a smartphone. In my opinion, smartphones provide connectivity but also act a vast reserve of knowledge for juvenile minds. In the below paragraphs I will put forward the benefits and drawbacks on this contentious topic with relevant examples.
First and foremost owning a smartphone allows teenagers to stay connected to the internet, browse content and grasp knowledge which enhances their skills and act a source of skill development. For instance, many smartphones are embedded with applications like YouTube, Google web browser which provides in-depth knowledge on subjects like sports, science, geography and history thus enhancing the general knowledge of adolescents. Additionally, smartphones act as a tool for doing various complex mathematical calculations and a device for the storage of critical data. For instance in India according to a recent survey done by global times, it was published that around 70 per cent of adolescents is owning smartphones for use in areas like storage and calculations.
Despite the benefits, there are drawbacks too, the most prominent one being the usage of smartphones by adolescents for playing addictive online games which distracts them and in turn affects their tertiary education grades. As per the recent survey was done by Times Global, it was published that around 80 per cent of kids use smartphones for playing online games thus affecting their school grades.
To conclude it is evident that advantages outweigh the disadvantages as in my opinion smartphones not only acts a tool not only for voice calls but also acts as a multipurpose device which enables teenagers for increasing knowledge from various sources available on the internet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 700, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, thus, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41830065359 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07080358847 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.2457269461 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.727272727 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8181818182 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181718169031 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825959211895 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869173964588 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12548681048 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103664859527 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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