Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?
Presently many people can hardly imagine their life without devices. However, some people think that household appliances pose many problems. In this essay I will consider both the positive and negative points, concluding it with my opinion that they bring more advantageous effect on our life.
Let us start with the positive sides of using machines at home. The ability to spend more time on enjoyable things is one of the merits. People, who are busy working , usually have little time for their children and hobbies, but with the help of modern appliances, they devote more of themselves to these pleasant activities. Another positive side of using household techniques is that they can spare labor-consuming tasks. Many wifes just load, for example, a washing machine or dishwasher rather than their grandmothers would regularly do these chores manually from morning till night. The last benefit is that these devices secure better results than humans. In comparison to people, computerized machines usually show high-quality results, since they operate in various modes and never change intensity.
Despite the above mentioned advantages, household apparatus have a few drawbacks. The first disadvantage is that these devices often malfunction. As other appliances in houses, washing machines, for instance, tend to stop functioning, when the voltage either increases or drops dramatically. The development of heavy reliance on such devices in families is another negative side. It often occurs that people are unaware of what to do when a electricity blackout lingers for more than one day. As result, they reluctantly resort to traditional methods of doing around the house. The last demerit of utilizing machines in home is that they require delicate usage. People are prone to breaking fragile details, for example, by forgetting to clean the inside of a dishwasher after having been exploiting for a long time.
In conclusion, although household apparatus may cause some inconvenience, I believe that they bring many more benefits than drawbacks. In fact, they often save us from many difficulties far beyond their warranty period if people thoroughly follow the user manual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1853.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41812865497 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79092358858 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622807017544 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2525816122 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.65 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11846826411 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354768612119 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307850028143 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076564981464 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201365868492 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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