Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?
Presently many people hardly imagine their life without devices. However, some people think that household appliances pose many problems. This essay will consider both the positive and negative points, concluding with the opinion that they bring more advantageous effects on families.
Let us start with the positive sides of using machines at home. The ability to spend more time on enjoyable things is one of the merits. People, who are busy working, usually have little time for their children and hobbies. However, with the help of modern appliances they can submit themselves to these pleasant activities longer. Another positive side of using household techniques is that they can spare labor-consuming tasks. Many wifes just load a washing machine or dishwasher rather than their grandmothers would regularly do these chores manually. The last benefit is that these devices secure better results than humans. In comparison to people, computerized machines usually show high-quality results, since they operate in various modes and never change intensity.
Despite the above mentioned advantages, household apparatus have a few drawbacks. The first disadvantage is that these devices often malfunction. As other appliances in houses, washing machines, for instance, tend to stop functioning, when the voltage either increases or drops dramatically. Another negative side is the development of heavy reliance on such devices. It often occurs that people are unaware of what to do when a electricity blackout lingers for more than one hour. Consequently, they reluctantly resort to traditional methods of doing around the house. The last demerit of utilizing machines in home is that they require delicate usage. People are prone to breaking fragile details, for example, by forgetting to clean the inside of a dishwasher after having been exploiting for a long time.
In conclusion, although household apparatus may cause some inconvenience, they bring many more benefits than drawbacks. In fact, they often save families from many difficulties as well as service far beyond the warranty period provided people follow the user manual thoroughly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 428, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, may, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56534954407 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81548890294 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623100303951 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.982350575 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1904761905 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2380952381 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116934364503 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335103754974 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328384025861 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761509083965 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242152808751 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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