Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is an issue about the effect of retail centers on congregations in the rural regions. Some social workers argue this effect can become devastating, while some managers of shopping centers believe that it is beneficial to towns. This essay agrees with the idea of negative impact.
Let us start with the reasons why some social workers claim that towns may disappear with the appearance of large trading centers. The first reason is that regional entrepreneurs are highly likely to move to other regions. As soon as Individual companies will go bankrupt, many businessmen can decide to open business in other regions. Another reason is that many people may be unemployed. Many ordinary workers, such as cashiers and porters, will be jobless due to the dissolution of compact stories, resulting them having to change their place to get employment. Furthermore, social facilities gradually degrade. The owners of shopping malls will be reluctant to improve the quality of life in the society, as they live in large cities.
However, some shopping centers state that there is nothing threatening to communities in remote areas. They justify this opinion with the following arguments. Firstly, they can secure a consistent supply of products. Many towns often experience problems with the supplement of products, because of their remote location, but, with the presence of trading malls, the locals will forget this inconvenience forever. Secondly, they may open a plenty of vacancies. Many people may lose jobs, but a supermarket are so large that they can easily find work in, since it has mainly departments to maintain in good condition. Moreover, they often attract investors. The presence of large markets usually attract other business leaders from various regions either to create branches in the region or invest money on local projects.
In conclusion, although some holders of supermarkets claim that there is no danger to the congregations in the countryside from their emergence, I think that rural areas should grow without trading centers, since they may shatter the settled bonds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30838323353 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71732442972 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583832335329 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.6001115727 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3157894737 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5789473684 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42105263158 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159474845634 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397108621555 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359787125933 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883109463719 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223833378711 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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