As the necessity for attaining higher education is fundamentally felt in modern societies, a large number of students face the dillema of leaving their parents’ houses in order to settle in campus of universities. While there are cogent reasons supporting this trend, its negative aspects should be taken into consideration as well.
Starting with the upsides, many former college students claim that living far from their families has contributed to their sense of independence and self-sufficiency. According to the proponents of this trend, this is a path preparing the youth for adulthood. Furthermore, entering the university is considered a life-changing experience which will supposedly shape the identity of an individual. In the Course of this development people need to be free of their families’ constant meddling, otherwise toxic conflicts will rise to damage the bond between parents and their offsprings.
Turning to the other side of the argument, saying farewell to one’s family, no matter for what cause, in numerous cases triggers anxiety or even depression,interfering with one's concentration, thus resulting in poor educational performance. It is also worth mentioning that in the absence of parents, especially maternal figure, one is entitled to do time consuming chores like cooking which may distract him from studying. Another demerit of this trend is that juveniles are prone to developing adverse habits like drug abuse or alcoholism. In fact, sorority and fraternity houses are exceptionally notorious in this regard, as rumors of their residents’ frivolty revolve.
To recapitulate, there are both pros and cons to moving out of parents’ house in persuit of a college degree. I, for one, opine that the demerits of this phenomenon in terms of feeling homesick and depressed, the risk of developing unfavorable behavior, and burdening the student with so many chores, outweigh merits like preparing the individual for the foesee future and preserving family bonds.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...fundamentally felt in modern societies, a large number of students face the dillema of leaving th...
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Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , interfering
...ases triggers anxiety or even depression,interfering with ones concentration, thus resulting...
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Line 5, column 179, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ety or even depression,interfering with ones concentration, thus resulting in poor e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, thus, well, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58116883117 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29622535928 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652597402597 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.1495965768 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.25 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177818696123 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572639951801 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653249926954 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097673897223 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595739142508 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.41 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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