Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, amd have health problems as a result.
Why do many working people not get enough exercise?
What can be done about this problem?
In recent years, popularity of cinema has undergone massive changes. Revolutionized technology persuaded people to have a twofold idea about place of cinema in society. While some people enjoy watching films at cinema, other believe there is no need for cinema when new devices provide it. Personally, I believe there are some merits on both sides being elaborated followed by my own take.
On the one hand, there are people who prefer to use their personal laptop or smartphone to watch a movie. They believe with todays’ high tech devices we do not need cinema anymore. The most compelling reason for their assertion is that personal device are easy to approach and portable. Consequently, they benefit us with the opportunity to become able to watch films everywhere we wish. Consider, a person can follow their favorite series in train’s cabin while traveling. Another justification for their assertion is time. Our smartphone is always beside us; we just need to decide about watching to do it in a minute while if we choose cinema it is so complicated as we have to buy ticket in advance, go through a long way to get there and wait in a que to just watch a movie. It is not worth from their point of view.
On the other hand, the opposing view emphasis the importance of cinema to spend a much more pleasurable time. To clarify, they advocate that cinema provides people with a unique experience. Watching a movie with number of individuals having same choice is a satisfying experience. Furthermore, it can count as a potentially effective circumstances to boost our social skills. So, the more people share their moments together, the stronger their community will become. In addition, physically cinema is significantly pleasurable to watch a movie as It possess a large screen and potentially proper sound system. These kinds of equipment are outstandingly expensive to buy by most of people. so, it is better to be provided by an organization.
To conclude, although both side of this controversially argument has their rational support, I believe both way of watching has its own distinct place in our life. Personally, I like to follow the recently released movies on large screen of cinema.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
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Line 3, column 690, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, so, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1844.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97035040431 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88971918453 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55525606469 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4431565524 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8181818182 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8636363636 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111471390804 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0338207544825 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0272774331258 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0659940478643 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235703040344 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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