You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about food that was served for lunch.
Write a letter to the manager of hotel. In your letter
• Say what the participants liked about the hotel
• Explain why they were unhappy about the food
• Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to bring some important feedback of our meeting participant to your attention. The meeting that was held at ‘Imperial’ banquet in your hotel on 23th of October.
Most of the participants of the meeting were highly satisfied with your hotel. They all complement your hotel design and architecture. furniture was comfortable and place has warm atmosphere. We also highly pleased with the working staffs’ treatment. They were really friendly and helpful.
The only matter we really did not expected was the improper lunch service. We ordered beef for lunch but the waiters brought us chicken. The fault was not ended up there. Foods were extremely cold to eat.
I hope you do necessary management to serve the orders appropriately. There are modern lunch service dishes in our local market which can be suitable to keep food enough hot to serve. I recommend you to search for new cook as well as new dishes to improve the quality of serving.
I trust that you will give essential attention to this matters, because I do not want this to be the last time to choose your hotel for meeting.
Faithfully yours,
Shady Fatemi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furniture
...ent your hotel design and architecture. furniture was comfortable and place has warm atmo...
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Line 4, column 35, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'expect'
Suggestion: expect
...ful. The only matter we really did not expected was the improper lunch service. We orde...
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Line 6, column 51, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...at you will give essential attention to this matters, because I do not want this to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, really, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93367346939 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68471598436 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663265306122 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1993965286 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.4375 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.25 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4375 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366629445954 0.216113520407 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962186200347 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679042198071 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170843741033 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680744699616 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.