Most of the working class devotes lesser or no time for workout during week days or weekends, which leads to health issues such as obesity, various spine problems and heart diseases. Working for more than sustainable time during working days to meet deadlines and following sedentary lifestyle during holidays provides less or no time for exercise. It is necessary to imply serious measures to combat this problem, which will be discussed in this essay.
First of all, people nowadays does overtime to meet deadlines given by their employers. Ultimately, they do not get enough time for exercise. For example, a recent study has shown that in a country with 6 working days, an individual works for more than 48 hours a week. Consequently, they get frustrated as well as exhausted due to overload. Secondly, to reduce work stress and relax mind as well as body, during weekends adult adapt sedentary lifestyle, seat still watch television at home or surf social media on cellphone or computer.
However, all these causes serious health problems. To overcome such issues, employer should step forward to reduce office timing and also perk their staff with subsidized gym membership. As a result, working adults will get enough time for themselves and are encouraged to do exercise. The government should also get involve by implementing rules such as a entrepreneur, who forced their employee to work for more than office time will be penalized.
To conclude, in order to fulfill professional commitments, person does not spend much time on improving personal health and suffers from various disease. This can only be solved by strictly imposed rules on overworking and encouraging for workout.
- Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have problems as a result Why do many working people not get enough exercise What can be done about this problem 78
- You work for an international company and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country Write a letter to your manager In your letter 1 Explain why you want to work in the company s head office for six months 2 Say how your 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18909090909 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70096401523 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625454545455 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5038123543 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.928571429 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29779003743 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101116240748 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674542273362 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169449977544 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710188209367 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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