In modern life, doing exercise is given not high importance by people who are snowed under with their occupations. The direct consequence of ignoring the crucial role of sports in their lives would be variant health troubles they might face in near future. In this essay, the reasons for this behavior and a solution will be discussed based on potents facts and valid instances.
People who are busy with their occupations do not allow exercising full their routine timetables based on two well-known reasons. First and foremost they are really in shortage of time of allocating a time for doing a sport since they wake up early in the morning and when they get home they deserve a big rest and they do not normally substitute resting with exercising. Most of the working people are mothers or fathers with a myriad of responsibilities to fulfill ranging from their own children supports to home kinds of stuff. Secondly and importantly this section of society are not really aware that without exercising they may confront divergent health problems ranging from impulsive behaviors to depression or anxiety. Further, based on the survey which is conducted by Canadian psychologist if people aware of how doing a sport could double or triple their function at work they would never miss it in their even hectic lifestyle.
There are countless solutions for ironing out this problematic issue. I would put a light on one of them which I suppose is more doable and effective to follow. Governments in every country could pass a law that every organization ought to hold a one-hour exercise session which is compulsory for its workers. These classes need to be free, energetic and fruitful for workes. With this program not only workers can enjoy doing a sport regularly, but also they do not have to give their rest time to exercise. If governments take steps to tackle this issue with the offered suggestion I am certain this would be the best technique to follow.
By way of conclusion, as most people these days are running to fulfill their needs of life by working overtime, doing an exercise is completely ignored by them. To assist the section of working people in societies, Governments ought to follow some strategies to clear up this issue and its upcoming unfavorable results.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 510, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, well, i suppose, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1912.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95336787565 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65211089128 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562176165803 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1639402023 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270065724399 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855430460552 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522248293816 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166967184029 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469718426941 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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