Nowadays, most of the working professionals are preoccupied with work because of the demanding work culture in many industries, thus they barely get enough physical activities which is causing numerous health-related issues. This essay will examine the causes and solution to this issue.
To begin with, people working in a very fast pace environment have a hectic schedule, they have various tasks that need to be performed within the deadlines provided by high management. In addition, they often have to support and train their subordinates which may consume most of their time and by the time they finish, they feel exhausted and do not have energy left to work out. Moreover, the gym facilities often situated far away from their workplace or home, hence they feel tired and lazy to commute to the gym. Even though working professionals have some time off, however, they prefer to spend that with their family or watching television and movies. Because of the lack of physical activity, people are gaining weight and experiencing several diseases such as stress, high blood pressure, and diabetes.
To overcome this issue, it is essential that professionals must create some time for working out. For instance, they can go running during their lunch break, they can also get some physical activity by walking around their desk area. Additionally, companies can create a gym area on the company campus, which can be quite accessible to the employees. Also, people must spend time on outdoor activities instead of spending time indoors. Lastly, working out regularly, it is necessary to eat healthily with a combination of nutritious food and some workout people can be healthy and avoid diseases.
In conclusion, to achieve work-life balance, it is must that professionals get some exercise in any form of activity every day. By being healthy and fit, they can focus more at work and enhance their productivity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18269230769 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72312754975 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1306617458 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324182377059 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111167217305 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547891634734 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208420214607 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021749754845 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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