Many of the worlds cities are currently facing a serious housing shortage.
What are some of the reason of this shortage and what solution can you suggest
Man has three basic amenities to sustain life -water, food and shelter. Providing shelter, nowadays, has been become a grave source of concern in all around the globe. There are important reasons which are responsible for uprooting this issue. However, some solvents are there to rootout this problem. I will portray about its factors and remedies in the subsequent segments.
As, far as my views are concerned, the predominant factor which raise the problem is, increasing population. To elaborate, there is a significant augmenting in the birthrate, due to this, the demand of housing is automatically elevating. Due to the land scarcity it creates a lot of problems such as inflation in the cost of owning the house. As a result, improvised people unable to pay the high cost for the house and to combat with the situations they make slums on the outskirts area of the city.
It is commonly said that the need of an hour is to nip the nozzel at the right to curb the problem. The prime solvent, government should emphasise on building the sky scrapers and high rise buildings.by doing this, it can accommodate a plethora of people in the same building and it also Solve out the problem like land scarcity. Apart from this, regime should urge their citizens to make a family plan of having one or more children but not more than that. As an illustration, a lot of sky rappers add marvellous building has been made in America, which accommodate approximately 10,000 people.
To recapitulate, lack of shelter problem is occurring due to the increasing population in the nation and it is difficult to fulfil the demand of land because of shortage. The best way to eradicate this problem is to build the high rise buildings which will gave places to reside people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, apart from, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84818481848 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.753274492 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587458745875 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2124467666 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0796684865865 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0282852780799 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341352945622 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0486675015463 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0137197630773 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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