Each year, the crime rate is increase
What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activities
Nowadays, the crime rate is at a mammoth rate in several nations and it is becoming a hot issue. There are numerous reason, which are responsible for uprooting this problem.however, some solvents are there to curb this problem. I will portray, factors and some remedies in the subsequent segments.
To begin with, there are between reason which are causing this problem. The predominant reason is unemployment. Due to the competitive era, it is not easy for everyone to earn their bread to sustain life. Even almost in Young has the sufficient education is to get a job, but they are unable to find any suitable jobs, because of the lack of jobs in the country. Do you to the unemployment, they find another Illegal ways to earn the livelihood such as they sell drugs in the society and so on. Apart from this, poverty is the another main cause of increasing the crime rate. For instance, in India, a lot of people are under the poverty line, they even do not fulfil their basic ementies of the life. Due to these reasons, they started robbing, thefting and murder for a little amount of money. So, that they can combat with the severe condition of their life and to acquire the comforts like other.
In the paradoxical side, there are some remedies, which are helpful to dedicate this problem. Primarily, it is the responsibility of the government that they should give the job to their citizens. so they cannot go on wrong way to acquire the money. Furthermore, it is the responsibility of the regime,they should give you free education to the impoverished children, so, they can able to uplift the living standards of their family. Besides this, legal bodies should give them to basic necessities of life so that can sustain your life.
To recapitulate, I cogitate that, poverty and unemployment are the main cause of woman in the crime rate. However, this problem can be sold out by going them the jobs. Moreover, I deem that, there is a need to understand the gravity of the problem and to address it before it gets too late
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, apart from, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71148459384 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68409318994 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515406162465 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9799941142 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.85 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120442947359 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438865316447 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068919115765 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913142236674 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472411796034 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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