The mark of a successful person is to be wealthy and have a successful career.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Generally speaking, factors to measure success of an individual is very subjective. Many people define victory by the materialistic possession which includes money, and a well-built career, whereas others believe happiness and contentment in life are true ways to weigh success. I agree with the latter part and the essay will examine the facts more closely.
To begin with, the phenomenon - successful person - should be attributed to the contribution a mankind has made to the society. This is because money earned for oneself does no good to others until and unless it is not spent to help others in raising their lifestyle. For instance, a prime minister of a country is successful only when he does good for his fellow citizens, and his win-win situation is outcome of undertakings or decisions he takes for betterment of his pupils. Moreover, it is not money for him which quantifies his winning, but it is the respect and honour that gives him satisfaction in years to come.
In addition, there are certain set of people who are at the receiving end of success because of their charitable work for poor community. These members of country work really hard trying to fix life of others. Statistically, they are not wealthiest humans in world nor their educational qualification makes them famous, it is their inherent quality to be selfless and kind to those in need that keeps their persona in limelight for ages.
In conclusion, although wealth and academics are important for better living standards, they cannot be considered as parameters of a successful person. In my opinion, acknowledgement of satisfaction and pride along with great interpersonal skills are driving force to qualify a person successful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, really, so, well, whereas, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25196850394 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05618569398 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661417322835 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2364656334 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.272727273 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166210726358 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624924174597 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520063290467 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976509369822 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032331689349 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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