Marriages are bigger and more expensive nowadays than in the past. Why is this the case? Is it a negative or positive development?
Marriage had been a sacred Institution. However, of late it is being made a larger than life affair, that too on a grander scale. I personally believe that it’s a harmful development for the entire humanity. This essay would analyse, as to why marriages held on such lavish scales would rake a havoc on the society?
The most compelling reason behind marriages becoming such expensive affairs is that everyone loves to flaunt their wealth, their power and their status. Since the affluent begin the trend and the poor gullible simply emulate their celebrations on account of illiteracy. Take for example, Laxmi Narayan Mittal, the richest Indian steel magnate settle in the UK. He had an opulent wedding ceremony for his daughter held at the grandest locations with an array of celebrity guest lasting for weeks, moreover the expenditure of this kind of wedding amounted to a whopping amount of a couple of 100 crores. Yet, the saddest part of this fairy tale wedding was that this marriage also ended up in a divorce in a short span of four months. This kind short-lived happiness does not justify the purpose of behind it.
Now, to further commence with my belief, which states such kinds of marriages full of grandiose are way too detrimental for the entire society, as these kind of grand marriages are highly responsible for corrupting the Indian poor as well as middle class people who get influenced by the glamour and the hype created by such weddings and thus, the poor daughter’s parents are forced to cough up that kind of money to get their daughters married to a decent guy. In order to illustrate, even today so many Indian farmers, are forced to spend their entire lives clearing heavy marriage debts, and when they are unable to clear their loans they end up committing suicide trying to meet the demands of the groom’s side to hold a couple of functions, to gift expensive jewelry as well as even sizable amount of cash. This is a highly wrong precedent started by the rich people who believe spending in giving big parties and sending big money can guarantee happiness, which is certainly not the fact.
To sum up, I firmly uphold my stance against wasteful spending in any kind of marriage. As plush marriages can never gaurantee success and furthermore, it makes the poor person's life all the more miserable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... detrimental for the entire society, as these kind of grand marriages are highly responsib...
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Line 7, column 108, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put before the verb 'can'.
Suggestion: never can
...ny kind of marriage. As plush marriages can never gaurantee success and furthermore, it m...
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Line 7, column 171, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...cess and furthermore, it makes the poor persons life all the more miserable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, as to, for example, kind of, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1952.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86783042394 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56314948117 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 176.041082164 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588528678304 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.147204849 49.4020404114 227% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 130.133333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7333333333 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136954853238 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046704232218 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344765328105 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0874648129706 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037076396193 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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