The quality of health care a person receives should not depend on the size of their bank balance. The government is responsible for providing a high level of heath care for all its citizens. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Health care consume a major part of a country’s budget. Some people are of the opinion that health concerns of an individual should not commensurate directly with the wealth. The government should provide free, prime health facilities to all its citizens. I totally agree that the government should shoulder the responsibility of coming up with sound health care schemes.
Firstly, I believe that after the onset of economic and fiscal development, next targeted sector should be that of the health care. As physical and mental health of the plebeians should be of a major concern. For instance, in most of the Scandinavian countries like Norway, Denmark Austria etc. all the senior citizens are entitled to free medical check-ups and free treatment, hospitalisation and medicines for all its citizens. Which has led to people feeling less overburdened and financially taxed because of the frequently arising health issues.
Secondly, I also strongly believe that the government should aim for healthy and happy individuals as along with development and prosperity it is high time it pays attention to improvising the quality of life. In economies like Dubai where medical expenses are too exorbitant as well as these come under the private sector. These expensive healthcare facilities cannot be availed of by even the middle-class or the poor. The people of these countries are therefore found flying to cheaper nations like India for cheaper and better medical facilities.
So, I sensibly and ostensibly conclude that a healthy nation can only work towards growth, development and advancement of a nation, because then the people also start believing as the government proves to genuinely nurture and cares for their patrons
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- Nowadays most people spend less time in their homes. What are the causes of it? What are the effects on society and individuals? 84
- Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in cinema.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 84
- Nowadays, families are not as close as in the past and a lot of people have become used to this. Explain the reason for this and discuss any possible effects it may have no society. 78
- In some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.What is your opinion on this? 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...totally agree that the government should shoulder the responsibility of coming up...
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Suggestion:
...nely nurture and cares for their patrons
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34306569343 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90041986595 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587591240876 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.372645901 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.571428571 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277943007846 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925663597683 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711834059175 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162028014558 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07166504792 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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