Nowadays, many people believe that both married couples have to work to have money for their life. In my opinion, I partly agree with this trend because for some reason
On the one hand, women have to do many works, however, their main responsibility is child-rearing and housekeeping. While the wife stays at home and do house chores, the man often works outside to earn money for a living, and they become a breadwinner. Some men gain a good salary, so their wives needn't work and they still have a happy life. Others must do lots of work because their husband or wife is not able to earn money. For example, In almost family in Vietnam, only one person works to earn money, and the other stays at home to do housework.
On the other hand, our standard of living is high, especially in metropolis. urban dwellers have to pay a lot of money to buy food, drink, and other things. So spouses must work outside to earn money. Besides, if both husband and wife earn a living, Their status in the family is equal. Moreover, when a woman works outside the home and makes money herself, she is financially independent of her husband and it reduces the burden for both.
In conclusion, every family has a different lifestyle, so I think they certainly have a solution to earn money for living
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 298, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: needn't
... men gain a good salary, so their wives neednt work and they still have a happy life. ...
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Line 4, column 77, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Urban
...ving is high, especially in metropolis. urban dwellers have to pay a lot of money to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1059.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56465517241 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44930390631 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538793103448 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7819033695 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.25 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20694371265 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856577179187 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449061826609 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138554607612 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00763267764459 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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