As mass communication continues to grow, the world is becoming more globalized. Some people believe that this will inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural identity.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Human beings are thriving in the era of communicative technology, but our traditional values suffer severely due to globalization. Many people hold that their cultural tradition would be fade away sooner or later, I believe it would either disappear or remain the same, but appearing in a new form.
It is true to a certain extent that the young generation may hardly see the cultural traits of our ancestors daily. For example, people can order a dish having flavor from all over the world quickly within a click on their so-called smartphone rather than preparing a traditional meal together. This fast-living pace, along with global communication, pulls their presence away to another country, another place, but separate us from our beloved family and nation, even though we sit on the same table or walking on the same street. Therefore, it is difficult for the previous generation who want to pass down their tradition that has lasted for centuries.
However, cultural identity will still be here and not yet in a new form, even if it is corrupted. For instance, Indian recipes can be made quickly with modern facilities in any family, unlike the previous generation. Additionally, the ways people drive, eat, sleep and work are still there, but its customs are manifested in a new appearance, more modern and international. The culture we are having right now, at this moment, is thus the continuation of our ancestral wisdom. As something can not become "nothing" as an essence of nature, there are only transformations.
In my perspective, youngsters still change their national culture in a new, yet unique way with an ancestral trait inherited from their parents among worldwide advancement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 300, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the same, but appearing in a new form. It is true to a certain extent that the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15770609319 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00975405865 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645161290323 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5063286069 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.916666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122060916204 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435972415392 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030143002293 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0662454061971 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032618277724 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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