Men do most of the high-level jobs. Should the government encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women?
What is your opinion on that?
Use your own knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Most of the high paid jobs are dominated by males. A section of people believe that a certain amount of high level jobs should be reserved for females as well. However, few people oppose this idea. I will scrutinize both aspects before forming any opinion at the end.
To embark on, our global is man dominated in most of sectors. So, it is quite obvious that high paid jobs will be captured by men. However, to have healthy society, we must encourage our female colleague to stand for high managerial jobs. For this, government must intervene and must take many steps. Firstly, in schools or in colleges certain portion of seats must be kept for females. This will help girls to enrole in streams like science, engineering etc. Secondly, in job sectors man-woman workforce must be fixed. For instance, to empower women, Indian government has fixed male-female ratio to 8:2 i.e. 20% reserved for women. Lastly, many event can be organised, specially for females, like science projects, innovation idea competition. It is observed that in field of science of technology, girls are given less importance. These initiative will definitely help women to showcase their talent and will be able to lead high level jobs such as CEO, MD and minister.
However, few people believe that reservation will create detrimental effect in our society. Mentally, men and women are same. Everyone can reach top position of an organization if he or she has capability. Reservation may deprive a worthy male candidate from getting a high paid job.
To recapitulate, reservation for women might be a good idea in school to encourage girls to get seats in competitive subjects. However, in jobs reservation should not be entertained as capable candidate will definitely reach highest level.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the sectors') or simply say ''most sectors''.
Suggestion: most of the sectors; most sectors
...bark on, our global is man dominated in most of sectors. So, it is quite obvious that high paid...
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Line 3, column 643, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun event seems to be countable; consider using: 'many events'.
Suggestion: many events
...:2 i.e. 20% reserved for women. Lastly, many event can be organised, specially for females...
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Line 7, column 220, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'reach the highest'.
Suggestion: reach the highest
...ed as capable candidate will definitely reach highest level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06825938567 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73005117529 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600682593857 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1474091879 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.7142857143 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9523809524 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244294566901 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740625215744 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567096335339 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158322957732 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415200169113 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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