Modern chlidren are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to be meant for adults only. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. what its causes and solution.
Indubitably, a paradigm shift has been noted in consumption pattern of people. In this contemporary era, obesity is a burning issue and has increased at an alarming rate among children. Apparently, modernization and westernization is to be blamed for this universal phenomenon. However, it can be clearly eradicated provided slew of remedial measures are taken up.
Fundamentally, the predominant factors that evidently trigger it can be observed. First and foremost, going to the unexpected changes in lifestyle of people there is a prolific increase of sedentary living in children which substantially contribute in stimulating reduced physical activity. Henceforth, young-lings confront the potential problem of gaining excessive weight. According to BBC, a recent research on children revealed that as a result of less manual work there undergoing plethora of diseases due to overweight. Secondly, consumption of junk food is another prominent factor in promoting fact in young ones. Subsequently, the easy availability of fast food and the large variety of food captivate the attention of children resultantly they get more inclined to consume these types of products. Consequently, fast food is rich in carbohydrates and fat and contributes to significant rise in gaining weight. Thirdly, although being the child every person has sweet tooth, sugary products are of paramount significance in inclusive weight gain of young ones.
Nevertheless, some potential measures if adopted can curb this menace. Chiefly, is introducing more physical exercise at school a viable solution for obese children? Certainly Yes! Ostensibly, when physical work will be promoted in children during their school hours it will act as a key influencing tool in making them fit. Moreover, parents should monitor what their children at eating. To vindicate, guardians should ensure that their offspring consume healthy and nutritious food which will benefit their sound health. In addition to this, awaring about a child the dismal consequences of things which should be avoided by them can act as a vital element in sweeping away the issue of increased fat.
Suffice to say, the world has witnessed plethora of new advancements out of which massive obesity is a growing concern. Even though, with modern lifestyle various types of diseases have also emerged. It is undeniable facts that reduced work out, high consumption of junk food and sugary products are crime reasons behind the tremendous that among children. However it can be resolved by triggering physical workout in schools and creating awareness about the catastrophic effect of consuming fatty and sugary products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2257.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51833740831 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02162110539 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59902200489 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 698.4 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3768460426 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.590909091 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5909090909 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146180599506 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413665828199 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399348769191 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091630763038 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212367042818 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 78.4519038076 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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