In todays world, old communication system has been replaced by modern ones such phones and other electonical devices. And the way of writing letters to communicate is not important because of availability of new communication methods.And I completely agree with this statememt and this esaay will discuss the reasons why.
Firstly, modern communication is faster and convinient due to the existence of this advance technology people can easily contact their nearest and dearest who are living far away from them.Hence, people are able to keep their relationship more stronger even im distance.A good illustration of this people living in Australai doing video chat with their belonging livin in Nepal.Secondly, people of this modern era are living a hective lifestyle so modern way of communication play an important role by becoming more user friendly to the users.People can write mail or call anyone at anytime within a second.In past people wrote letter on papers to interact with the people whi are far away from them and it tooks weeks or months to the reciver.But now the whole scenerio of communication has been changed.
Thirdly, modern communication has proved that it is very helpful in offices or wirkplace because in work the workers, manager have to interact with each other to share their workfile reports and updates.Therefore, using of advanced technology in the way of communication makes life more easier all over the world.
To sum up, I totally conspire that modern communication play an importan role in our communication beacuse it is easier and faster than anything else that help todays people to interact. Writing letter may be need in some cases but almost every people around the world use this moden communication where there is no longer important to write letter.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, in some cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19931271478 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99296341001 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591065292096 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.2975951904 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 235.033803715 49.4020404114 476% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 252.166666667 106.682146367 236% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.5 20.7667163134 234% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.3333333333 7.06120827912 260% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21469087213 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117023159525 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462270303688 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140793385557 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040853504731 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.3 13.0946893788 208% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.3 50.2224549098 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.77 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.1190380762 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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