In the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animal as food or to use animal products for, for example, clothing and medicines. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the current era, people believe that there is no longer need of using creature for meals and things like wearables as well as drugs. Whereas, I firmly believe that animals are still slaughtered and used by human beings. We will see how animals are still used commonly.
The need for animals has never been decreased. Although there are many brands that are now focusing on vegan products, still there is a long way to go. For example, the most eaten meat that is chicken is consumed by millions of people every day. Also, the and high-quality jackets and boots are also made up of leather, that is, the skin of the beast. So the usage of animals for human need can not be placed by anything.
The sacrifice of sheep, goat, cow, buffalo or camel is a religious practice in Islam. Due to this fact, it is impossible for Muslims to neglect the value of an animal, as it is a part of there religion. Thousands and millions of sheep are sacrificed each year. For instance, global meat consumption has increased to 58% over the 20 years. so, even if the animal health organizations try to minimize the use of animals, it will be quiet time taking and hard to implement.
To conclude, in today's world, it is said that there is a rare practice of animal consumption for man use. However, I strongly disagree with the statement, as the need of beast to make products for humans have never decreased. Moreover, sacrificing an animal is a religious practice among Muslims which is done every year. So even if the organizations try to implement vegan practices, there will always be need of animals for human benefit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...has increased to 58% over the 20 years. so, even if the animal health organization...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6013986014 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49450469434 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.377089776 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.4117647059 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8235294118 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357214208282 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11909158648 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962138346471 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233634620982 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901224945948 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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