With an increasing overweight population some people think universities should make sport a compulsory module on all degree courses. To what extent do you agree?
It is considered that institutes must implement sports in all courses to overcome the rising number of obese people. I strongly agree with this statement, as this could help a lot in many ways for young generation, who is suffering from health issues. I have explained further in detail about the positive aspects related to above statement.
A healthy and active mind results in better academic performance. Regular sports activities help us to achieve a energy which makes or mind healthy and active. As students nowadays are so much into there studies that they hardly get time to make them self registered for some games or such activities. However, if universities and institutes take the reasonability and make sports an essential element in their course outline than all students can avail the opportunity of performing in game activities of their own choices. For example, a research has shown that institutes with results focus not only on education but also on the extra curriculum activities. Those students have a healthy lifestyle and they excel more in life by continuing their habit of sports even after education.
Most time of student is spent on collage where they do nothing but study and eat. Therefore, they get lazy and dumb, which results in putting on extra kilos on their body. Many students, for instance, in west can be seen getting obese and inactive due to the lack of interest and involvement in sports activities. Universities students gets loads of assignments and projects which make them so much busy in their work, which means the only time when they get time to perform sports is when they are in there campus. So it is necessary for institutes work on stadiums and playgrounds to promote healthy sports.
To recapitulate, is is stated that universities must adopt sports in order to put a period on the ultimately growing rate of extra weighted people. I firmly believe that it is a great solution towards this problem. It will not only benefit students but also universities as there students will get good result with active mind and healthy body. Moreover, students not getting enough time out of busy routine can get the opportunity to practice game activities at there campus.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92741935484 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6086891878 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513440860215 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 372.0 20.2975951904 1833% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1833.0 106.682146367 1718% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 372.0 20.7667163134 1791% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 74.0 7.06120827912 1048% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133559257284 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133559257284 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873754868192 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236565931098 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 187.8 13.0946893788 1434% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -306.1 50.2224549098 -609% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 148.4 11.3001002004 1313% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.79 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 25.48 8.58950901804 297% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.78957915832 582% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 150.8 10.1190380762 1490% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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